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    pale Male

    N.Y falcon lives in central park, first finished in the new year. Also to all HAPPY NEW YEAR!



    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RGE_YrlsjUE
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    Great image with nice detail, but it lacks a sense of depth. There could be a way to show that by varying the intensity of light and shadow.
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    I like the palette and the overall look (plus I have a soft spot for birds!) but I agree it lacks a bit of depth. I'd suggest to put less detail in the areas which are further away and supposedly hidden in shadow, the leaves there look a bit too detailed/visible.
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