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    Red <Just 1 artwork>

    This is to place finally finished work? So I guess I am in the right place??? This took me a while because I am horrible at this....>_< I feel so jittery from staying up late for this.
    Last edited by Ivipaleu; December 23rd, 2009 at 07:01 AM.


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    I like the 80s ariel feel to it. Clean up your edges on the head band and face, neck area. Everything's too soft. Also I think her necks' too long ans shoulders are wide.

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    same as above.

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    I like the color choices. The poor ear needs some lovin', though. Its rendering is pretty sloppy compared to the rest of the face.

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    nice feel to it but the clavicle and the base of the neck area is slightly skewed

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    Sashin, welcome to CA.
    In general, the angle change at the root of the nose (where the glabella meets the nose bones) is ideally placed just above the tear ducts. You have it placed a bit below. Though in some ethnicities it can drop but its looking a little exaggerated right now. Not sure if that was your intention to make it that low but you may want to consider raising it. Although you will loose some of the lovely cartoon spirit and she will appear more mature but it would be more natural. It is not far off, please continue to post an update.
    - Kinjark

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