View Poll Results: what of those things do I need to practice on the most right now regarding the body?
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June 9th, 2010 #209
update -on to page 8 :D
another update on M.Ali
Parsa- Thanks I tried to change it. Hope its better? Cheers!
Naidy- I was very glad to read your post, I am working hard so I am glad it shows. Hope u like My Ali Not finished though. Thx for stopping by again friend.
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well now I will start on something else ^^ this will have to do for now. peace
June 9th, 2010 #211
I think your problem is that your not blocking in shapes and getting the propotions right first. Yours shading and blend need work the transition from on color to the next is really noticable. I guess If I had to say it, think of the features as more of abstract. So yea hope th is helps!
June 9th, 2010 #212
I will need to be packing and such, going to live in another town for two months so I will probably not be updating anything for a few days because of this. But be sure to keep an eye out for my return in about 2-3 days. cheers y'all.
Diarum- Thanks for the helpful comment. Though I still dont really get it, blocking in shapes? I am very bad at all these sentences which regards art I am sorry I am trying to learn. Think I know what u mean by more abstract, more like objects. Will try to keep it in mind.
This is a start at a woman, trying not to use lines but values for the sketch. Will continue in this one. Only 2 min this is. Take care everybody! Seeya soon again.
June 11th, 2010 #213
I know I said I wouldnt update in a while. But I had to take out my wacom here in the train, made some changes To M.Ali. He is still looking a bit wierd, the left eye is all done again but still not as good as I want it. changed a lot really, moved the nose and mouth to the left, the ear a bit down, made some hair to the eyebrows which I loved also.
Well critique and help with this one is welcomed Also I want to tell you that I really learn while doing these, sitting and looking what is looking wrong and redoing stuf make me learn a lot, atleast I feel this way. Cheers!
June 11th, 2010 #214
try to think about volume and form! now its looks flat especially nouse! keep working dude!
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June 11th, 2010 #215
I love the bird and the eye with fur, very very good, and also I like the way you are experimenting with the hand art work.. I must say I havnt really tackled hands or feet yet, as I know they are really hard.
Nice work, keep adding more :-)
June 11th, 2010 #216
Vandog- thanks m8. I am trying hehe but I have lots to learn, hope u see improvement from my first portrait on the first page Volume and form it is! cheeers
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June 13th, 2010 #218
yay nice progress! the lady kneeling down, i think you should find yourself a reference picture, its a very hard pose to do from imagination! keeeeep them coming!!
June 13th, 2010 #219
June 14th, 2010 #220
Much going on, new job, new ppl, new home for the summer so I have little time drawing, will try as soon as I am settled. Cheers
Alexandra- Thank you very much. Hands and feet are damn hard, maybe this is why ppl say that u need to do them a lot try some time! Im sure theyll get better and better. Cheers
kmoeini- Thanks I am glad ppl see improvement
Par- got a ref for that, just didnt pose it take care friend
June 14th, 2010 #221