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June 11th, 2012 #601
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June 11th, 2012 #602
PhatBuddha - Thanks! I appreciate it : ) Glad you stopped by!
June 13th, 2012 #603Registered User
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You show a real talent for cartoon animals. That last sea turtle is awesome. The cartoon humans need some work, imho. I'm not that great with words, but something about the design and construction seems off. They lack an appeal your animals have. I can do a draw over, but don't want to step on any toes. Let me know if such critiques are welcome.
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June 13th, 2012 #604
Rajesh - Of Course of Course! I welcome all kinda of critiques! Your more than welcome to do drawovers. I'd love to see how you can help and appreciate your advice
June 13th, 2012 #605
June 13th, 2012 #606Registered User
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Here are the redraws...one thing I forgot to put in the images itself - note how the back of the head flows into the neck. It's something I noticed that was missing in your drawings. A lot of the ratios that apply to real life and realistic drawings can be applied to cartoons seamlessly. For example, the ear is halfway between the front and back of the head (loose guideline, not rule), and the cartoon skull, like the real skull, is made up of a cranium and jaw, with the cranium occupying most of that mass.
Your drawings have a lot of life, which is harder to learn than how to construct a drawing properly. Master this and you'll be a force to be reckoned with.
Last edited by rajeshB; June 13th, 2012 at 05:56 AM.
June 13th, 2012 #607
RajeshB: Wow thanks! This is all very helpful! I appreciate it. Thanks for putting some time into explaining/fixing my work : )
Hope alls well!
June 20th, 2012 #608
Character head studies
June 28th, 2012 #609
Colored Monster. Initial concept, developing.
June 28th, 2012 #610
Thanks! No worries, you will get ahead with lots of practice and hard work
June 29th, 2012 #611
Those skull studies are amazing. They look so happy .XD Your lines are really awesome. The characters have great personality. Keep it up!
sense of purpose
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June 29th, 2012 #612
Sin Eater - Thanks! Appreciate it. More on the way
July 3rd, 2012 #613
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July 3rd, 2012 #614
Wow I really love your head studies with the normal and just the skull. Plus if seems like your style feels like older cartoons like really older Disney stuff in those head shots. I am getting tired so I cannot think of better examples XD. But its awesome to see since I don't see that as much.
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July 3rd, 2012 #615
Jaik + JellySwirl - Thank you both for the kind words. I appreciate it. Look out for more sketches and studies soon!
July 9th, 2012 #616
Redesign of my character Maddox
July 17th, 2012 #617
Maddox is adorable! lovely personality and nice design. When does he come out as a little plushy toy?
If you're open for critique, he seems a bit front-heavy. I'd extend his tail slightly and his legs as well, so the placement of his feet is extended half a foot or so.
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July 19th, 2012 #618
DefiledVisions - Haha thanks! you know me, I'm always open for critique! Thanks! I appreciate it, I'll look into fixing that asap.
July 20th, 2012 #619
Hey you Long time since i commented here. I'm glad to see your studies and all. I really like those series of skulls and heads. As for your Maddox, I agree with DV about extending her tail and legs and if I may add the critique, I think her tail should be angled down closer to the ground (after extending it) to prevent her from falling forward, cuz if i'm not mistaken, i think Maddox is not at her normal standing position, like she's bending her body forward and lifting his head up.
It's a really good looking design, by the way. I like it a lot!
Last edited by witcrack; July 20th, 2012 at 02:52 PM.
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July 27th, 2012 #620
Giiiirl, you doing nice color now! That Maddox though - unbalanced pose. Bring his tushie little bit back. Cheers!
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August 4th, 2012 #621
Seraph Fawkes - Thanks Man, Appreciate it : )
I know its been quite a while since I've posted any thing on here, been quite busy with a lot of opportunities recently. But here are a couple of quick sketches I did at figure drawing a few weeks ago.
August 4th, 2012 #622
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August 4th, 2012 #623
Kevin - Thanks! I appreciate it. Glad you stopped by and checked my work out! Look out for more on the way. Hopefully I can update more frequently, regardless of my hectic schedule
August 4th, 2012 #624
August 5th, 2012 #625
Witcrack - Thanks! Good to hear. More on the way
August 5th, 2012 #626
Some more colored critters of mine.
August 10th, 2012 #627
Quick Sketch of one of my characters
Last edited by Odayga; August 10th, 2012 at 11:22 AM.
August 10th, 2012 #628
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August 10th, 2012 #629
Love your line flow, and all these monsters are awesome!
Just added a lot of your works to my inspirations folder
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August 10th, 2012 #630
Fetsch & Tsabu - Thanks! I appreciate it : ) Heres another quick sketch of one of my "snooty" characters and boy does she have quite the attitude!
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