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    I need critiques. I feel stuck. Thanks so much guys.

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    Her breasts seem to be the loudest part of the image. I would tone them down , especially with a perspective that should leave her head as the most prominant area of the piece. I would also intensify the color of areas closeer to the viewer. The picture right now looks rather washed out.

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