I don't share the foreground worry. In fact, like your knight piece - my attention is firmly drawn to her face. That may be as it's just more polished, but has to be a desirable thing.. right?
As for the halberd; the axe head could be larger perhaps - really using that space below where it sits currently (like a long letter 'J' / scythe-like). Or, could rust it up a bit and take some chunks out of it. The weapon itself having some story behind it, or indication of use and experience.. as is suggested by the warrior herself? Up to you.. I think she's working, so far.
AG, I think what you have in the background is fine already, just needs making more.. extreme and hellish! Maybe it's just my monitor, but the orange of the flame he's holding seems dull.. maybe push the oranges and yellows all round?
Last edited by Liz Edwards; January 29th, 2010 at 04:32 PM.
Slayer, certainly hope you do! oh, I think the border you sent wasn't quite the right proportions - should scale to " 9 cm by 15.5 cm " and it was something like 14.85. I just made the border at the top and bottom a little bigger, haha.
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very nice set that you've got going. I lao sreall ylike the individual pieces but i was wondering hw you decided to colour the frames. are they random? Or do the colours have a meaning.
Anyways happy to see a nother team in the finsihed thread. We were feeling kinda lonely!