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    Looking for some advice

    Hey, I was hoping some folks could give me a few tips or advice on how this is looking. and what could be done to improve it. Any help would be appreciated.

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    Stop using soft brushes. That's my main issue by far.

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    alright thanks, i think its more of the blending that i have to cut down on. kind of takes away from the textures.

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    edge control, man. edges edges edges.
    Elwell explains it better than I possibly could http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=51913

    Just don't forget that there are edges inside the contours of objects. Meaning the edges between different values where planes change

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    Could you post a shot of the still life?

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    hmm ive picked up some other issues with my parallels on the table and the all around proportion

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    could someone give me some tips on how to give the shoe a better texture?

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    just a little update

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