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    After lurking around, I decided to join. Please give me critics and instructions so I can improve. Thank you

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    Ugh, I have the urge to color this...

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    Okay....First of all Welcome to CA.org
    To improve I definitively suggest you to scratch more the paper, work more on intention, and structure, leave color for later

    keep it up

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    WOW this is great!

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    Mindless sketches...
    Takehiko Inoue's Vagabond.

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    Thank you for the opinions and directions. I appreciate them greatly.

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    Hello there!
    You know how to render your b/w sketches. They're good. But i agree with andres that you have to work on your structure more. But do color if you like, there's no strict rule, but be balanced I'll be back when you updated more. Cheers!

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    I'm a really big fan of Inoue Takehiko's work. Even though your work reminds me of his it's still got it's own twist. I really like how the eyes are larger than life but realistic in a way. Really awesome .

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    Ketoprak? Just like that Indonesian food?

    Nice studies so far. I love your life-drawing!
    Btw, can you teach me how to draw rose? I haven't been able to draw rose since I was a kid >.<

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    Anatomy kills me....I kept on drawing people in uncomfortable positions -___-
    Please point out my mistakes and help me improve.


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    You've got a really pretty and delicate style going, but I have to agree with what some others have said about structure. Some of the sketches don't show very good grasp of the body's forms, though it'll, imo, be a bit tricky to reconcile that with the flat paper-work like quality of your linework. Keep posting!

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    Hi Ketoprak,
    Your studies are improving, and it looks like you're practicing the right things.
    I have to say I also agree with the others comments about structure. It's hard but you are drawing stuff with 3 dimensions, so you might want to practice getting that three-dimensional quality in your work. Not only through shading, but showing us the planes of the subject, just as you would a box in perspective.
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    I'll try to work on structure next


    @zombifried: thank you. I'm learning as much as I can.
    @equili_brium: thanks! I think I can keep this pace for a while.

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