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    a hawk

    a hawk one mistake i noticed was the shape of the head..its too round for a hawk. but i like it like this. what do you think? are there other mistakes i don't see? thanks for viewing!
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    The image just appears too grey to me.
    Push some of the blacks abit more. Create more contrast and bring it to life.

    Perhaps add a highlight into the eye, highlights in eyes generally give the subjects abit more 'life'

    Pretty good sketch through - keep doing more.
    my sketches here... http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=92997

    www.sevans.co.nz , for more images and to kill time.
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    thank you for your advice, i appreciate the feedback! : ) hows this?a hawk
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