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    need to bring focus.

    ok- so I had an amazing paintover on this last time I posted. I did what the paintover suggested- and I'm liking it (for the most part). obviously it's not done but my problem is the girl- I want her to be the focus. I thought adding fog would do it- but I'd still like her to pop more!

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    Forget the fog - its flattening everything.
    If I squint at this it all becomes the same colour.
    If you want to make her pop - use lighting - this should help give form to the dragon as well.

    No way near right, but hopefully it'll help

    Watch those wings on the forward 'harpy/flying orc', personally I think they're interfering with the dragons mouth (JMO)

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    The light source for me is confusing and seems to be different on each entity

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    If you want to make the girl the focus, silohuette her head either by moving the wing behind her head now, so her dark head is on a light background or lighten her hair so it stands out against the wing, as it is now. You have all these warm tones in the foreground , cool and lighten the background and the far figure so you get a sense of atmosphere

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