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November 28th, 2009 #1
Todays work! This is the first time in a long time that I've been able to put pretty much exactly what I was thinking down without major issues!
I feel like she's having some anatomy issues, with the legs? I've redone them a few times but I can't seem to get it right
Any help or critique are very much appreciated as always ! Thank you! = D
Last edited by kittens; December 4th, 2009 at 02:04 AM.
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Looks fine to me!
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November 29th, 2009 #3
Her right wrist is tiny!
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November 29th, 2009 #4
yea, the wrist is considerably much smaller than the other. Also the leg that is straighened, i think there it is a little too long from below the calf
November 29th, 2009 #5
I think her front, bent leg, the thigh is too short - or the other leg is too long. If you take the distance from her belt to her knee (on the straight leg) - its veeerry long.
Hope that helps! This will be a really nice piece when its done. Love the colours
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November 30th, 2009 #6
you did a nice job with the face but I think where the two legs and the bottom of her dress all meet creates a tangent that is confusing the position of her legs. Which is left and which is right.
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December 2nd, 2009 #7
Finals this week so I didn't have a ton of time to work on this so far but..
Thanks so much for the input everyone! Here a is a bit of progress. I tried to thicken the wrist. I think it that it is still too small, but changing it now will be a pain so I might just leave it, or make the other wrist smaller to match? I still feel like I'm having trouble with the legs but I tried to use your crits to fix them as much as I could! I think they are better than they were at least! = )
December 4th, 2009 #8
Feeling like this is near finished and I generally like it! Please let me know if there is anything that could be improved as far as colors and such, the lineart I think I'm going to leave alone at this point unless there a quick fix that needs to be done.
Thanks for all your help as always! = )
December 4th, 2009 #9
Ahhhhh, very nice. Yes the wrist is still too small. The problem I see is that it is skinny for about half he length of her forearm. Legs are beautiful, but the same thing i keep seeing are proportions. her right leg is smaller than her left. Anatomically they look right, but size not so much.
Colors look great to me tho!!!
December 5th, 2009 #10
The ankle are different widths. She's also not weighted, maybe bending the toes on the foot on the floor might help. Such a pretty piece.
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