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Todays work! This is the first time in a long time that I've been able to put pretty much exactly what I was thinking down without major issues!
I feel like she's having some anatomy issues, with the legs? I've redone them a few times but I can't seem to get it right
Any help or critique are very much appreciated as always ! Thank you! = D
Last edited by kittens; December 4th, 2009 at 01:04 AM.
Looks fine to me!
Her right wrist is tiny!
yea, the wrist is considerably much smaller than the other. Also the leg that is straighened, i think there it is a little too long from below the calf
I think her front, bent leg, the thigh is too short - or the other leg is too long. If you take the distance from her belt to her knee (on the straight leg) - its veeerry long.
Hope that helps! This will be a really nice piece when its done. Love the colours
you did a nice job with the face but I think where the two legs and the bottom of her dress all meet creates a tangent that is confusing the position of her legs. Which is left and which is right.
Finals this week so I didn't have a ton of time to work on this so far but..
Thanks so much for the input everyone! Here a is a bit of progress. I tried to thicken the wrist. I think it that it is still too small, but changing it now will be a pain so I might just leave it, or make the other wrist smaller to match? I still feel like I'm having trouble with the legs but I tried to use your crits to fix them as much as I could! I think they are better than they were at least! = )
Feeling like this is near finished and I generally like it! Please let me know if there is anything that could be improved as far as colors and such, the lineart I think I'm going to leave alone at this point unless there a quick fix that needs to be done.
Thanks for all your help as always! = )
Ahhhhh, very nice. Yes the wrist is still too small. The problem I see is that it is skinny for about half he length of her forearm. Legs are beautiful, but the same thing i keep seeing are proportions. her right leg is smaller than her left. Anatomically they look right, but size not so much.
Colors look great to me tho!!!
The ankle are different widths. She's also not weighted, maybe bending the toes on the foot on the floor might help. Such a pretty piece.