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    ULTIMATE COW

    here`s a preview from my comicbook character, the ultimate cow. hope you like it. Soon i'll post the final version of this image.
    crits welcome as always even knowing this image its not finished.

    leus
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    it might help your audience if you uploaded a smaller version of your image D;
    otherwise looks pretty good
    the only thing I can suggest is that grass--I doubt all those blades would be lit like that, and you can tell it's a custom brush right away. Try airbrushing a darker tone over the parts farther from the light, and I think that will help to unify your image. :]

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    Yeah, man, make it smaller.

    I like the idea and the face, but the abs make no sense even comically. They should be going down along on the belly. ;P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Enydimon View Post
    I like the idea and the face, but the abs make no sense even comically. They should be going down along on the belly. ;P
    I think he's heading towards that pit-fighter with a beer-gut feel... The abs do seem cramped though, the belly seems a little too round. Cows tend to have a very strong rip-cage, might be hard, with him being upright. Maybe working that in to things a little more could help to balance out the ab/belly. Making the individual abs taller and / or smoothing them in to the gut a bit more might also help.
    It's hard to be sure how to critique this though, you've really got a sam kieth thing nailed down here, and... Well hey, working the stomach a bit more, may pull away from that style a bit, but I think it would help out the character a lot. Not super hero abs... But, hey you could even loose them almost entirely, or decrease the number of them.

    Looking forward to seeing more.
    Crit aside though. This is one awesome draft!

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    ok, I have to work that abs area more. But I wanted to make him look fat, that arent abs, its fat.

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    I like the piece, nice work pal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Leus View Post
    ok, I have to work that abs area more. But I wanted to make him look fat, that arent abs, its fat.
    I would suggest using a fat person for reference because they don't look like rolls.

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    What about E. Honda from Street Fighter 2, he could possibly be a good source of ref, in fact Google up sumo wrestlers! I luv the direction of ultimate cow, cool character!

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