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Last edited by JoeS; September 10th, 2014 at 07:24 PM.
Hey JoeS ^^
Nice stuff so far some of them look very nice ^^ keep on updating and hard-working...
to really improve i would advice you not just to upload stuff which u like also stuff which you dont really like to get advices from members of these community to improve ^^
keep at it
Sweet looking dragons! The bodies seem a little stiff though, maybe make the limbs a little more fluid? Not as boxy. Don't know if that makes sense but there it is . Cool armor concepts too, very lively, keep at it.
wow, your only 15 and your this good at drawing, all im gonna say is, keep it up mate! in a few years who knows where your work is going to lead you =D
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You should wait before using colour.
Grow further with your line drawings before even concidering using colour.
Sketch sketch sketch.
Damn you suck (lol not in a bad way) I mean cause your so good so young i'm 18 and you like 2x better then me give or take a couple times . Keep it up
These sketches look very nice, one thing I would advise would be to make them abit more dynamic, I couldn't help but notice how very little movement there was, some of the body parts dont really correspond with the movements of the larger, parenting body parts, but other than that, I think that you are excellent, I started on this site whenever I turned 15 which was around last year and I have to say that you are doing a hell of alot better job than I did, keep posting
in regards to your last post, I must laugh, because I recently bought the same book, and I went to look for the poses you based these on... XD
your human anatomy is already far better than mine, (Ib being the same age as yourself), but your creature and armor design seems to be lacking in the detail department... don't be afraid to experement with unconventional designs, heavy shading, and and add in little bits of veins, spikes, ad perhaps natural armor plating to your dragon designs... they look abit dull otherwise... the same goes for the armor!
alright, now that I have posted my useless bit of advice, carry on and have fun!
ah, something else I must try someday... apple studies... well, acctually, I really need to do quite afew studies of nearly everything conceavable... because I seldom ever do, and it would probably be benificial...
ut of course, the battle against procrastionation is always a loosing one... I only just started work on a contest that's due in about sixteen days! argh...
ooooh, I like the 'finished' piece you have there... although I wouldn't call it finished...
the hair you have placed attop her head does not really resemble hair... I sugest going in and drawing thick and thin clumps and strands of hair folowing the direction of that... shape... and be sure to add some flyaways for effect as well!
and... detail... is... lacking...
I mean, you did a good job rendering the clothing, but it all seems to be rather monocromatic... add some designs on the cloth, perhaps some metal plates somewhere, or chains and belts of some kind flowing accross her waist... the piece just sort of looks empty without some sort of minute accesory items...
that's just my opinion of course, feel free to call it finished if you want, but keep what I've said in mind for future pieces...
Thanks zypherax, I'll remember for future work, though im not going to dwell on this piece for now