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November 20th, 2009 #1
[critic request] Pfil, profile
Here's a drawing of Pfil, a H manga character, I did some weeks ago...
I'm actually changing style recently, I was more in the realism like drawings, and I'm going more into the manga style now...
I wanted some feedback and critics about this drawing, what do you think about it ? overall, design, rendering and such...
Thanks in advance
Last edited by kamui_kun; September 26th, 2011 at 09:10 AM.
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Your perspective's all off. Her face is a straight-out profile, but we can see her chesty-bits from a bit of an overhead angle. And I'm leaving the animu-hatery to everyone else.
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November 20th, 2009 #3
The colours are good, nice tones variation expecially on the flesh
the face profile maybe could be a bit more gentle in my view, it seems to make the nose slightly big as it is now. I guess a shorter and rounder curve on the upper part of the nose could make a better effect, but I'm not really into thatkind of style.
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November 20th, 2009 #4
Thanks for your replies
Well she could be turning her head to her right... maybe T.T
OK the perspective is off, but I though that in manga design we could cheat a little with these kind of stuff for a more simple approach... I'm wrong it seems
I see your point, the nose is sticking out too much, I'll try to take that in consideration next time
November 20th, 2009 #5
btw, if you would rate this drawing, on a scale of 5 (5 for perfect, 3 for so so, and 0 for an absolute c***), what would you give ?
November 20th, 2009 #6
I think that her torso should be at a different angle and that her shoulder is a bit lumpy. You might want to work on your arms.
November 20th, 2009 #7
It's true that the lower part of the drawing looks a bit strange, maybe because I didn't put much attention to that part (its almost identical to the initial quick sketch...)