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November 5th, 2009 #1
wip / looking for criticism .
This is a wip I've been working on for about 4-5 hours ? didn't really keep track of the time. The sky is from cgtextures.com. I would like to know what is to change / what is to keep , and also if you have any tips too to make it look better . Thanks a lot !
Here's my wip :
Practice makes perfect.
Passion and dedication cleanse the mind.
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right now the main thing for me is the placement of each object. You are indicating things are going in space with atmospheric perspective, but all the objects are on the edge of the horizon line. Make the ones closer to us lower and the ones further away closer to the horizon line. Also the moon/sun is smack dab in the middle which is kind of distracting. I would try putting it more to the left or right. And indicate some shadows.
I hope this helps,
Sketch Page: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=173240