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    My finished work

    Hello everyone, this is my first time posting here, I hope you will enjoy my art as much as I did making them.

    I will start by posting my comic book, something I am working on slowly, I know it doesn't look like your regular comic book with the transition of the panels, which I am experimenting with, the font yes, I will change it, already familiar with the headache it caused to my friends

    Another note, I do not have a proper scanner, so some of the details will not be as crisp as I want it to be.

    Anyway, I will rant no more.

    Enjoy!
    Arsalan

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    You know, I don't think it's so much the font as the way the text is overwhelmed by the images. Maybe you just need a harder definition of it on top of the pictures to some how make it pop out, maybe with a black/white box around it or something.

    Otherwise, I love it. It's different, and the style of inkwork reminds me of some of my favourite comic artists.

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    great art style! Like you say, the text needs addressing as it looks very 'stuck on top as an afterthought' at the moment. Where it works best is on the final page in the speach bubbles - perhaps giving the text a background or box would help seperate it from the very vibrant artwork.

    Good stuff!

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    Thank you @mundanity, and @Phil Moss, I think your comments are spot on, I am working on page 4, and hopefully it will turn out better, again thank you for your comments, I do not mind at all anyone going harsh, but providing reasonable critique.



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    More work

    I usually do not do graffiti, but I enjoyed doing this, because it is not my usual style, acrylics and ink on wood board

    Enjoy

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    I like your style, looks really good! Very wet...

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    Thank you GriNGo for you comment, glad you like it

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