Struggled a lot with this painting, I learnt a lot about form and improved my drawing a bit I think! On that note, I also have a lot of drawings in my sketch book, I just need to find some time to scan them, or maybe I will just do another painting.. time is so precious!
fantasyartist - Thank you, I appreciate your feedback, I'll work on getting nice colour temperature.
suggestion for the last one: her weapon could be alive like a snake and be longer, like he s twisting around her and appear again on her right side, his way it will create more movement in the composition
You've put in so much work and it really shows! For the last one, the main thing I see is the the left side of the composition feels very empty. Perhaps some more variation in the values or tones would help it feel more balanced.
Nice work on those last paintings bro! For the one in #1660, you placed the character in the center which makes it hard to balance the composition. You might want to move her to the left since she seems to be walking to the right. Keep it up!
You have many illustration ideas. I've seen a recent nice video about going from these sketches to an illustration, maye it will help you . http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAQbTEz4PDM
The illustrator started like you did (light spots) then added the other elements without loosing that brights areas.