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    Corsairs over Islands

    Hi everyone !
    Here's my first post so I start with my last production

    Hope you guys will enjoy !

    "The best activities for your health are pumping and humping." A.S. - 1975.
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    That's a very good start

    Looks so fine to me .. yet I think that the propeller .. should create a full circle .. blurred circle.
    water is fine - depth.. excellent .

    God job Joegillian

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    Welcome, very nice pic. My only comment is the dark line at the bottom really pulls the eye away from the planes and detracts from the composition. The planes and colors are great.

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    That's really fine! Sweet, historically accurate, evocative- nice feeling of hard sunlight on the planes, and the bkg is tight. :chug:

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    Very good job. I always liked WW2 planes.
    And this pic makes me want to go to a war (and win)

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    Great pic but on both the planes both are curved into a weird persective and there higher then the right wing on the plane. but just could be me looking at it. From the corsair pic I've seen

    Last edited by Shadowkiller; January 22nd, 2004 at 01:24 PM.
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