Art: I/bot
 
View testimonialsView Artwork
Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: I/bot

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    23
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Red face I/bot

    Greetings everyone,

    Im new here. I cant call myself an artist really, i work as an industrial designer in the point of sale field. And im very fond of imaginary game art. Anything that pushes ones limits towards combining form , substraight and interaction. So i sit and come up with my own fun stuff at times. And Im serious about evolving myself towards fine sculpting. Yes, a newbee i are in this.

    Please note i have no experience in organic modeling, have to get into that asap, and these are Rhino3d models build using splines and surfaces.

    Please do leave your comments and also critics on how to better my work.

    Thanx for your time talented people,

    Alp (www.coroflot.com/germaner)

    Attached Images Attached Images        
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    110
    Thanks
    104
    Thanked 40 Times in 30 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    This is great. A really cool design. I really like the helmet & torso..its got a nice flow to it. Also the helmet looks cool with the front (respirator/grille thingy) added, i like how it lights up. The motif is a nice touch. Lots of nice little details.
    The only thing thats throwing it off a bit for me is he looks to be leaning a bit too far forward (unless hes about to tackle someone?)

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    23
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Icon

    Thank you for your reply. You are right he s leaning too far forward. I wanted to give it some aggression but instead of pushing it with the torso it would be wiser to have a complete different studio setup. Or else, its a stomach bug

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    23
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    another shot

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    23
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    mission briefing session )

    please do tell me how to enhance this layout. what would you do ?

    thanks for looking!

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  7. #6
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Hull, England
    Posts
    161
    Thanks
    7
    Thanked 34 Times in 33 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    It's beautiful but Life is what you're after in this one. Try giving each one a personality.
    Though this is ruddy difficult in full suits, can one have it's mask off?

    Other things to try to bring to the fore
    Different stances: All of them seem to have their feet exactly the same, can you change some whilst maintaining a realistic sense of balance?
    Arms: Get one of them scratching his head :-)
    Suits: Can you have slightly different colours/symbols or chuck some muck/damage on them?
    Weapons: Though it may take a bit more work can they carry different weapons ready to 'roll out', lol

    I like your sense of depth in the picture and the head torch effects are really good, chuck a few other things into the mix and you'll have something good :-)

    So, where will your imagination take you today?...
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  8. #7
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    23
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Hi Darkwulfs Talon,

    Thank you for your suggestions. I appriciate your input and everything you mentioned. I will sure to remember them before i render.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
The Art Department
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook