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That new piece looks good, I like the idea of it.
However it could use some work. The hood doesn't follow the dudes head and a lot of the heads around him could use some tweaking.
The light comes from above but some of the heads doesn't get light from above. I also think you could push the light just slightly on the heads too because it doesn't really convince me since there's such a strong light on the guy in focus. Obviously that's an "focus of the image thing" but you would be better of giving some of the heads a little more light though.
I made a draw/paint over but the damn file is lost somewhere... naming stuff asd is not a good idea.
These works are great
Self Portrait Thread
fudgeloaf - Thanks man! But "push it more" doesn't really mean anything to me tough
Loathsome - Thanks bro. You're right about the light on the heads, I fixed 'em some to make it more consistent but I really don't want to put any more light on them because they aren't that important. Thanks for the feedback!
Unlink40 - Thanks!
Trying to keep this thread alive somewhat. Here's a commission thing I started tonight, the guy wanted a pinup but I steered him more into a illustrationish thing. I think it's more fun to do, less cliché. Poison Ivy from Batman.
Hey bro, Poison Ivy is great! =) Really like the leafy atmosphere you made in the piece =) That is an interesting crop you made for the finished piece, I'm not sure whether I would've made it a bit more centred, but it is interesting still =) The drawing for Harley gives a nice comp imho, really like that =) And I think you nailed her expression, would be just how I imagine her a bit naughty you know =) Great work in any case, think your figures are improving and you're getting the hands pretty good too =)
i stumbled across you sb, i can see improvement over pages
i liked many of your works
the last poison ivy post seems .... not your of level (sorry if i'm too honest)
did u used some referencing ?
some minor proportions issues: long neck, little big head ...
composition should be better (she is too far left and lack attitude)
i'm a bit harsh coz i saw your earlier works and you have talent can be taken further more
good luck with your nexts
great deal of studies. awesome.
Hey alexson Harley's looking good, nice texture on the costume. I'd add a shadow under that middle bobble/bell thingy and darken the left hand side of her white neck piece it's looking a bit flat and floaty, a few random colour variations would look nice as well
Yeah, fuck that job, just paint, and draw too =) Harley is awesome bro! =) The flame effects really add to her personality, think you did a sweet job on her costume too =) Maybe a bit more sparkle in her eyes, and a touch of lip gloss, just ideas =) Nice job in any case =) Keep up the awesome! =)
AlexTooth - Thanks man! I know I always do the heads too big, its really annoying.
anamhaleem - Thanks man!
rodriguez - Thanks for the input, appreciate it!
Kungfoowiz - Thanks man! I just need to scrape together some $$ so I'll be ok for a few month while I study and stuff.
yogeshj25 - Thanks pal!
Here's a sketch for commission nr. 3 Catwoman.
Good job on the harley pic
The Kitty looks good I especially like the punk face and expression you gave her nice clean lines... couple of suggestions though, make her weist wider its more attractive, her right hand with the whip is too short so is the left, the wrists should be about the line with the crutch, her legs seem to be off compared to the torso, keep up the hard work man.
Nice color and sense of form in your paintings!
Take care of the different kind of materials.
In the last painting the materials like the leather look great, but in the two before it is all the same rendering in my opinion ^^