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September 23rd, 2009 #1it is
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I have been starting on this thing now and I thought I should post this WIP to get some comments and suggestions on it.
Thanks in advance!
Hide this ad by registering as a memberSeptember 23rd, 2009 #2
ooo very giger!
my only crit is to give it more of a focus, by that i mean I am drawn to the light, but when i get there, there is not much to warrrent the focus brought by the intense white light, maybe have some focus up there, introduce some human elements up there to bring a recognisable focus
looks cool tho, I am a giger fan and this appeals
September 24th, 2009 #3
The textures youve rendered reminds me of one of Mudvayne's CD covers very nice. I do think it needs a clearer focus, if it were me i would darken that arm and hand coming into the foreground - it isnt as interesting as the silhouette you've created with the figure leaning over and the light dynamics in that area, and i think it would help focus the light too. if you put your hand up to the screen and block the arm out of the piece seems much stronger in my opinion you dont have to take it out entirely but it might be nicer to put it in shadow and use midtones to show any required definition instead of highlights. I can tell you've put a lot of time into this piece already