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    my meager sketchbook

    well, i've been a member for about a year or so now, so i guess now is as good a time to start a sketchbook.

    my goal here is to to just improve my skills- i'd love to get into the sequential art/illustrative business and this community has been very inspiring to me, so i trust you all will be able to help me out with that.

    i know that my human anatomy needs serious work- it's very difficult when opportunities to sketch willing live models are VERY few and far between where i live, so i can only depend on online resources. hopefully if i'm able to get accepted to one of the colleges i've applied to, i'll be in an area where such a request won't be so odd.


    with that in mind, here's some of the things i've done so far. will upload more as i work on them.

    [updated 12/18/09]
    Last edited by rinjii; December 18th, 2009 at 01:17 PM.
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    Hiya!

    There are some real issues with the first girls face, particularly the eyes and the shape of her head. Look at someone with their face in profile to see what I mean.

    I like the third pic.

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    thank you psychotime i think i see what you mean about the eyes in particular in the first one. i'll go back over it and see what comes up.
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    Using bigger brushes will get you smoother and less distracting rendering. Keep it up.

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    wow i really slunked on this. thank you craz for your suggestion

    i'm gonna update this as soon as i shrink down some files
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    more updates!
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