i had to bump the "Kill the character above you thread" because its so fucking cool. i love it. i just wish more people would get in on it!!! come on people, you get to slaughter another persons character! so cool. anyways, here is the thread if your interested...
Damn man, your sketchbook's crammed full of action and madness! I love it.
My biggest critique would just be your line confidence! You're on the ball with foreshortening and form, but it would be real nice to see those skills executed with brave, single strokes. All texture must be intentional, the not product of scribbly lines!
Keep at it man, I'm really enjoying your work.
Heey bro, you're anatomy's been improving a lot since my last visit, nice.
I'm gonna have to agree with Chips about the line thing, you have a bunch of tiny
lines scattered around pretty much everywhere, if that's your "thing" it's
fine but you don't want it clouding the focus.
I haven't been by in a bit, so it's great to see your improvement! Work is getting tight
Props for tackling that horse photo study, tough pose with tough lighting and foreshortening to boot. If the reference doesn't always translate, I'll crop or make changes to try and add action, I think it's the fence and back legs that are proving to be a challenge visually win conveying the movement. I'm on a tangent here, just wanted to say good work!
Chips - your absolutely right! i am seriously guilty of laziness whenever it comes to linework, and textures too... i never really take the time to do studies of whatever material im rendering... i just wing it... gotta work on tht! thanks man!!
Ludic - yea i feel ya! im trying to devte some more time to material studies to improve that! thanks for stopping by man!
Black Sun S. - thanks a bunch! i really appreciate that!
Mike L - haha feel free to speak all you want! coming from you, anything is helpful! thanks a bunch man!!
rokushoxxx - thank you! more are on the way!!
Christoffer - barb dude? i think the one your referring to was digital... i hardly ever work in pastels, well not since highschool really. but thanks man!! i appreciate it!
spitboi7 - no slackin haha, just my girlfriend was holdng me hostage for a few days... heres some shit for ya!!
3D model character study, taken from an artist on c g h u b . c o m
You seem really dedicated, I like your sketches, especially the random ink doodles, like the ones from june 13th, very cool! Guile looks great man - nice work! Your comic panels are also really fun I like those too.
One thing that really stood out to me is you do a lot of stuff from a head-on camera angle, like the character is square to the camera. In a portfolio that will be very noticeable - and if you draw too much like that in can hinder your ability. (not saying you do, but just sayin..)
I see you post a lot in the weekly challenges, good luck with those I try to do them too when I can.