Crits and feedback are welcome =)
That mouth and that pair of shoes look really good!
Not much I can critique on
I would be happy if you could give me some feedback on my scetchbook : http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php/280596-Preparing-for-Art-School/page2
Observations looking good! keep it up and try doing some pages of poses without rendering!
You get some really good contrast in your sketches, the boots from a couple posts ago in particular look great! It's good to see you doing some figure drawings too, I'd love to see more of them. Keep up the great work
Great constructions/sketches going on in here, aside from activity. Keep up the good work!
Wow, very good work Feinar! I'm impressed by your command of structure in particular. You seem to have an excellent grasp on the forms of the human face. You are also great at rendering, holy cow.
Your gestures are good so far. They capture the poses and attitudes of the subjects very well. The only criticism I have right now is the fuzziness of your lines. It would be more to your benefit if you tried to draw in unbroken lines, instead of letting them get all chicken-scratch-y. That's one secret to a truly professional look.
Aside from that...like Hunchdebunch said, I'd be interested in seeing more figure work from you. And just more work in general. Your updates have been rather sparse The more you post, the more the nice folks here on CA will be able to help you along. And, to be perfectly honest, I'd just like to see more!
Good work, and I hope you come around more often!
You should try drawing gestures (30 sec to 2min) even better if you did with ink, don't use any eraser. Gestures will help you be more confident and be more "economical" with your linework. Be confident you have a good feel on structure and planes.
WOW... there was like a sudden jump in quality and I was like - uh... what happened there... great to see such huge progress - keep it up. Lovely and I DO mean lovely pencil work.
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Feinar, you have such great work here. I love the way you structure your forms with straight lines, reminds me of russian masters. And that dry brush rendering... really neat. Keep it up!
Sketchbook - http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=277664
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MAN!! those are some badass life studies please keep it up! Is that all graphite? I'm having a super hard time defining super sharp edges like yours, any advice?
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