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I'm not sure but her jaw looks a little fat maybe? but it also could have had something to do with matching the top portion of the head. To my eye it improved allot once you covered that up with the hair. The eye on the viewer's left looks a bit funky too. The hair's flat as well but I'm assuming that was just to check the basic form of it. It looks like a good start, you should definitely finish
The nose is too long; it should be just shy of the halfway point between the eyes and the chin.
The nose is looking a bit vague where it meets the brow line and along it's length. You might want to dig up some refs of asian noses to get a clearer idea of what they generally look like.
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