Heya,

This is my first critique center post and I hope it's decent enough to post here.. heh

Hoping to improve!

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Not really sure where I'm going with this, but thought I'd better post it now when it's still in an early stage.. This is usually the time I toss it and start a new one.

Started as a study on skintone, portrait only, but figured I want some more out of this. I'm trying to make a not so pretty older woman that looks very suspicious at the viewer, as if she keeps a very close eye on you. Her fake one!

I think the wall on the left side of the image gives it some distance, as if she doesn't trust you and don't even dare to get closer!

Alright, enough yappin' from me. Any critique is welcome.