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    Unicornmeat & other tasty visual treats!

    Hi!

    My name is Jacqueline Jocson, 21 y/o, and currently getting my Animation & Digital Arts MFA from USC.

    Comments and of course crits are most welcome!
    Thanks for stopping by :]

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    Nice start for the sketchbook! i really like your use of colors and values in these pieces. I think more anatomy studies is the best course of action. You have a good base, you just need to keep working it harder until it gets to a great level. In the first drawing, i notice that the arms seem a little weird. The torso looks pretty lovely, but the arms don't flow as well from the body. The muscles feel a little too unnatural.

    Interesting creature designs, too! you have good detail... just keep on working on anatomy studies! Also, don't forget to add a sense of ground or background to your characters. They're all currently sort of floating on air, or maybe barely casting a light shadow. For studies, that's alright, but I just want to make sure that everything isn't like that!!

    My sketchbook! http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=166709

    If you want follow up critique/comments, feel free to send me a PM or post on a thread of mine! I might not realize you need it, otherwise.
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    nice start...i like how u painted the fur in last creature....very cool colors


    cheeers!!!

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