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    WIP electric head

    NOTE: this is finished and posted here: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=168256



    Would be interested in hearing crits on this WIP. Cheers.
    Last edited by Drin; September 7th, 2009 at 12:02 AM.
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    Alright well didn't add much but this is as far as I will be going with this piece FOR NOW (ie until I get a tablet with pressure sensitivity in a week, haha).

    Self crits:
    - could use a more dynamic composition
    - face proportions are iffy at best
    - lighting is probably too flat looking, though that was more or less intentional to create a specific kind of atmosphere
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    looks good i dig it! u should try to establish your ontop/bottom more, theres alot of parts that look like they just merg, i think they should be distinguished as being either ontop of the skin or comming out from inside
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    Quote Originally Posted by MrEshovel View Post
    looks good i dig it! u should try to establish your ontop/bottom more, theres alot of parts that look like they just merg, i think they should be distinguished as being either ontop of the skin or comming out from inside
    Well I kind of was hoping for the merging effect, actually. Do you think it looks more like a mistake than intentional, though?

    I got my first Wacom on Friday! Super yay. I'll finish this off now.
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