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August 24th, 2009 #1
Blasphemers against life, feedback wanted
First off, I'm a bit uncertain wether or not this is good enough to be shown here. Second, I'll admit I got lazy and rushed it towards the end, but I consider it finished (time to move on, etc.). Hopefully that's not frowned upon.
I know there's a ton of errors in this, like inconsistant shading, anathomy flaws (These fiends were never meant to look "correct" anyways) and so on. But any and all feedback is appreciated.
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It is certainly not frowned upon to ask for a critique
Let me start by saying that all my crits are only personal opinions. This does not feel finished to be honest. I quite like the idea and I think the monsters could look really ineteresting but as it stands now, the image is very very hard to read. You need more contrast of light/shadow in the areas of interest. Right now what the eye immediately registers are 2 white shapes and a black one which is shame because the monsters/characters can look really well if they only read well. I would suggest paly with the lighting on the some more. add some highlights or greys here and there; you say there were some inaccuracies you claim are intentional but even so, just make it more readable.
I do think it can be a really cool image. Hope it was helpful
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August 24th, 2009 #3
Yeah, I do see what you mean. This is something I struggle quite a bit with. I tried adding some more light and contrast, and I think it's a bit more readable. But too tired to make a serious effort now, so it'll have to wait.
Anyways, thanks for commenting, it was helpful. And I'm glad you found the creatures somewhat satisfying
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Dark... but excellent. For me some of the white needs extra weight on it to bring the figures out from the dark a bit more. That way the details won't be missed.
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August 24th, 2009 #5
I agree with pauscorpi, the image is hard to read, there is a lot of noise. There are so many gray lines in the black you can't discern any real shapes, adding some more hi-lights would definitely help. I really like the idea and what you've got going though
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August 25th, 2009 #6
Thanks Smellypunks & cbiscuit.
I did some alterations, I think it reads a bit better now.