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    Red face Flowermilk girls

    Hi there!

    I just wanted to share with you guys some girly art. I'm doing it mainly for fun but my girls will hopefully appear in an iphone game we're working on with a friend sometime in the future.

    This first is called Cheyenne Wild, a.k.a "Bounty".
    I'll post updates about this project from time to time. Enjoy :-)
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    Thank you sir may I have another!
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    If I ever get arrested, I hope it can be by her. Nice work.

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    If I'd see her patroling a super market then I would instantly shop-lift in an extremely obvious way so I would get caught by her. Great one!
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    officer is there a problem, please search me, there is something in my pants that is dangerous....


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    Did I mentioned I like police brutality ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jelluh View Post
    Did I mentioned I like police brutality ?
    me too me tooo!!! I would like to get 'Girlhandled' by her...

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    Enough with the sexist posts now please. I really like the look of the reflections, it gives the picture a nice realistic contrast to the cartoony way the clothes and face has been painted. Though, I think the legs and the lower part of her body is a bit out of proportions, but I guess that's a choice from your side. Good work, keep it up.
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    Here are some of my thoughts and suggestions:

    I like the overall saturated colours, and her hair is pretty cool. Good use of saturation to lead our attention.

    I think the style between the body and the face is incoherent. the body feels rather realistically depicted, as if drawn from reference, whereas the face seems more "freestyled". Eighter work more on the face, or "de-realize" the body.

    Furthermore I think some blue tones in the shadows and overall more contrasts between cool and warm in the fleshtones would make her "pop" more.

    I have no idea where those arms would connect with the deltoids. It seems as if something strange is going on with her anatomy underneath those sleeves.

    The cloth is just sloppy. I think you should spend more time on nailing those wrinkles.

    If she´s supposed to be pretty, I think her broad, flat, boxer nose, kind of deviates from that impression. *edit- I think you should make it smaller to make her sexier/cuter.

    Her right arm (our left), looks as if it´s running paralelly along her hip/torso. It´s a tangent which confuses depth.

    Also, I think you could introduce some atmospheric perspective to help increase depth.

    In addition I can´t help but question the motive. I find it a stereotypical, sexualised and slightly demeaning illustration of the female sex. I usually have no problem with sexy big boobed pornstar pin-ups. I don´t quite know why, but I somehow experience this image tastless. What´s your message?

    Finally, in my opinion, the hat looks pasted on. I would like to see it more tied in with the character. Maybe introduce some more weight and make the cast shadow more hard edged?
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    I like it!!!!!!

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    Really solid on the wet skin surface, looks good enough to eat

    Some things I noticed, but I think Kaktuzlime pointed them out - the arms seem to go up into shoulders that are too small/narrow.

    The neck also seems a tad too thick? Something about her head/neck features makes her a bit husky.

    But lovely otherwise!

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    Wow. she's gorgeous. amazing work!!

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    Thorsell: "I think the legs and the lower part of her body is a bit out of proportions, but I guess that's a choice from your side."

    I think it has to do with the viewing angle. Looking up at her... She has power over the viewer (both sexual power, and a big stick). She is definitely in a dominant position.

    Also, emphasizing the broad hips and relatively narrow waist just shows the effects of estrogen during her development. It is a little exaggerated, sure, but it has a powerful effect.

    To echo what kaktuzlime said about the nose, I certainly think the nostrils could be done a little differently. The nose looks kind of fake compared to the rest of her features, like it's not quite done in the same style.

    Still, that's a minor point. I really like this piece.

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    Nice stuff, but how can she sweat like that and still have dry clothes ? I'm just joking.

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    Thanks for all the comments guys. As for the proportions, it's definitely a choice so I'm kinda glad that you actually noticed the big legs.
    I won't answer in detail to all the comments about the (numerous) flaws that I'll gladly admit. The image is far from perfect as pretty much everything I do :-) Usually, I tend to jump (No pun intended) on the next one rather than try to fix every minor thing because you can spend a lifetime trying to nail everything. Again, I do appreciate the valuable feedback though.
    As for the sexist/tasteless debate, kaktuzlime, then I guess it's very personal to each individual. Some people are more easily offended than others, and even though it is not my intent to shock, I won't do anything either to tone down what I feel right. The bottom line is that I wanted to do a rather outrageous, erotic charged image, and this is what I did. As you may notice, most people actually saw the girl as a strong character, which tends to make me think that it's no demeaning. What is my message? Guess what? It's pin-up art. No message. I just painted a very stereotypical fantasy that turns me on. It ends up being a bimbo cop with big boobs, which I totally assume. Guess most people saw that too, which I'm happy about ;-)
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