Alright, I'm still relatively new, and I would like some good critique on a few of my pieces. I have taken both of these to a judge before and never got much of a critique. I've gotten a few pointers that will help me next time I draw (Who knew that there are erasers shaped like pens?), but never got anything that would improve my technique. I think the judge got lazy after looking at so much art.
So, I bring you my art!
First one is inspired by my own guinea pig. It is hard to do white fur that has some value in it. But I'm more concerned about the anatomy than the coloring. Done with graphite.
The second one is inspired by the song "Desert Rose." The rose is supposed to have a sketchy feel. I think it looks good with that style; the lines vary. Done with felt tip marker.