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August 13th, 2009 #1
New to Concept Art..taking critiques!
Alright, I'm still relatively new, and I would like some good critique on a few of my pieces. I have taken both of these to a judge before and never got much of a critique. I've gotten a few pointers that will help me next time I draw (Who knew that there are erasers shaped like pens?), but never got anything that would improve my technique. I think the judge got lazy after looking at so much art.
So, I bring you my art!
First one is inspired by my own guinea pig. It is hard to do white fur that has some value in it. But I'm more concerned about the anatomy than the coloring. Done with graphite.
The second one is inspired by the song "Desert Rose." The rose is supposed to have a sketchy feel. I think it looks good with that style; the lines vary. Done with felt tip marker.
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Both are so-so, but you need to forget about outlines or making it stand out. Do both again without adding the extremes of dark like you have. White GP on a pale background requires gradients of grey not sticking him in black hole. The shadows on the petals of any flower does not result in sudden dark lines. Re-do and re-post.
August 13th, 2009 #3Traditional Artist
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I'm going to load the guinea pig into photoshop and outline where I think improvements can be made and I'll tell you why I think so.
Unexpectedly, I disagree with Black Spot about the gradients of grey. I think a dark value such as what you have now is fine. Its the same concept with portraits - many portrait artists put a darker value next to the face for contrast purposes. With a pure white animal with occassional brown/black (which color?) fur, I think the extra contrast is an asset, if not needed. You could make a light or medium value tonal on the paper and lift the animals shape out, but drawing its shape would be much easier. Also, push the dark further with the guinea pigs eye. I'm doing the photoshop thing now - but I left my tablet at my apartment so you'll have to excuse my poor workmanship with the mouse I have.
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August 14th, 2009 #4
The guinea pig has dark and light brown for spots.
And yes, I'll try to make the dark/light contrast a little less extreme. I'll see what I can do for the guinea pig, at least. I made the light/dark contrast in the rose so extreme because I was afraid that no one would be able to see it.
Thanks for the critiques ^^ I await that picture, hitnrun.