Welcome to the ssg.
Some nice work in here .
It's probably better that the egg is brown... it means that there is a bigger value jump with the highlights.
The shape looks good man, but becareful of your edges. And if you havent read this thread, you probably should. http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=51913
With the female torso, make sure you get the right volumes to the breasts, they dont look right. Remember gravity makes them sag more, and also makes the hard edge at the bottom of the breasts much sharper. Check out mops mystique over at polycount, it might help http://boards.polycount.net/showthre...light=mystique
Most things in here look realy good man, keep it up.