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Thread: Dr. Fazio's Marvelous Eco-Wagon
July 31st, 2009 #1
Dr. Fazio's Marvelous Eco-Wagon
Title: Dr. Fazio's Marvelous Eco-Wagon
Hi! First time posting here :] I wish I had a whole thread filled up with progress and critiques for you all, but I only found out about this competition yesterday so I was a bit pressed for time. Anyway, enjoy!
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only yesterday... but your work looks really good... what is your piece's plot...?
August 1st, 2009 #3
NIRONERU - Yeah, I wish I'd had more time to do something epic but this is all I could manage in a day or two. The plot's up to the viewer, really, but essentially Dr. Fazio drives his wagon around the winding roads of filthy cities, making the world just a little bit cleaner one street at a time.
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August 1st, 2009 #4
August 1st, 2009 #5
oh i really like that It makes me think of a reverse Murky & Lurky.
i know you said you only had a day or two, but i think it would improve the piece if you had more of the grass/nature type things showing. Perhaps you like it enough to continue working on it even tho the contest is over? i know i hope so
Also, i say it fits fine into the contest.The machine makes a new land so to speak.
Good luck to you and WTG on doing something so quickly! i had almost 3 weeks and i still just barely got it done far enough to submit. LOL
"Steering perception? i am.
Inviting contradiction? i am."