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    Newborn-1st breath of air

    juz manage 2 complete >w<
    sniffsniff onli saw this post yesterday~
    meowmeowmi..

    illustrations make simple text into colorful pictures.>w<
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    like how she is looking,

    i dislike the wing on her right side.....
    obviously you are still working on it so you will probably be fixing it and im just jumping the gun...

    anyway good luck
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    I really like where you are going with her face. The colors seem fun and full of life..I agree that the wings are still needing work

    Love to see more
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    Red face >W<

    thanks for d comments..sadly not much time is given for me. sniffsniff..
    will fix it in soon.
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    The skin is nicely rendered. Just that like Bhrandon and Lillycat already said the wings need more love obviously--

    I find the composition a tad too long though it seems like you leave some negative space for titles or text. o_O
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    hehehe huey~

    kekeke >w< where r u now, huey?
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