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    Newborn_machine life/mans progeny

    i hope i'm doing this right, the concept i'm going off of is the idea of man and the new life that he will create. i was thinking that it would happen in some military science lab, probably some war machine...here are some sketches/value studies...i'm looking for feedback on anything. thanks-javier
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    Good start, I do have three suggestions though

    1. The composition of the first one is the strongest, just have the robot looking at viewer

    2. Some unfinished parts on the robot that are hooked up to a bigger assembly like machine can help add to the drama.

    3. A more innocent yet powerful feel to the robot will make it feel like a newborn

    Hope that helps
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    thanks

    thanks ed i appreciate
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    some sketches for the final...
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    Hmm....Waiting for the final shot!!
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    in progress....
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    in progress II
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