riotorange- Lol thank you!! Hmm i was thinking the bottom left is just missing something. Needs a pinch of red, but something not so..unimportant (am i being confusing here?. I think it would have been nice if i could put some narrative there, like those caligraphy characters that reads vertically, but for the life of me i can only write english. I threw in something there now though, with my housemate's help.
As for the figure, it's made to blend to the back a little because i don't want it to have too much focus since it is secondary to the Newborn creature. Thanks still though, i'm still considering it