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Thread: Newborn: The Story of the Polong

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    riotorange- Lol thank you!! Hmm i was thinking the bottom left is just missing something. Needs a pinch of red, but something not so..unimportant (am i being confusing here?. I think it would have been nice if i could put some narrative there, like those caligraphy characters that reads vertically, but for the life of me i can only write english. I threw in something there now though, with my housemate's help.

    As for the figure, it's made to blend to the back a little because i don't want it to have too much focus since it is secondary to the Newborn creature. Thanks still though, i'm still considering it
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    ah well i had figured you probably didnt want it standing out too much, but thought perhaps that was what was making you feel it was missing something.
    Maybe you might add another one of the little spiraly plant like things that are on the right of it?

    maybe i should stop staring at the art and read what its about in order to help you some. HAHA
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    Thanks still, i still appreciate your feedback The plant.. hmm, it may clutter the space there too much, unnecessary distraction?

    Here's my update anyhow, just tossed in that little chinese-y seal chop.
    In addition to that little thing that bothers me, i'm hoping it completes my aim to make it look like an old traditional parchment/book/scroll that tells the myth of the Polong!
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    Minor change in layout, also upped the dark contrasts on the face a little bit..
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    actually i think that will do it. Cheers!
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    Beautiful entry man!
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    Very well done! Good use of texture and colour here.
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    OMG!!! *Faints...
    wait, save save save.. *Faints
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    Awesome work. Love the style
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    Yipes, my apologies, i have been away for a while tending to final assignments of the semester.

    riotorange- Yay

    Gringo- Thanks!

    laxon- Thank you!

    Rezeroth- *bows in gratitude..thank you for everything partner!!

    Senpen- Thank you! i am trying to push a style here, am glad you like it!
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    wow !! this is aces ( beautiful "Calyx" ;-)... school is out.. zzzzzzzz ( boring)..

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    Yipes Kevin!! You found me.. thank you for your comment! I didn't leave a comment on your thread yet but i was watching it.

    I must give you credits for this piece, i had in mind loud and clear what you told me about painting the face, especially the eye area. Thank you! I'm also gonna take the class with Tomutsu.

    Boring? I expected you to be drawing and painting still with that passionate rage
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    Hey Cal, aren't' you suppose to post your final image here?

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