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    Newborn: The Fall

    My focus is on the story of the Fall.

    I started with a sketch to get the poses - Eve will be holding a sickly white, deformed child with umbilical-looking cords slowly strangling Eve, while reaching for Adam so that he will share her fate.

    Newborn: The Fall

    After the first sketch, I did a couple more to refine, but the composition is pretty bland and some of the elements weren't working. The grey on other side is a sort of "tunnel of trees" and I think that it failed.

    Newborn: The Fall

    Newborn: The Fall

    So I moved past the idea to focus on a more interesting composition and more fantastic landscape, and so far the sketch feels much more successful to me.

    Newborn: The Fall

    Any critiques would be wonderful, though I know I don't have much to go on at this point.

    *Edit - Addition*

    WIP #5...

    Newborn: The Fall
    Last edited by xaic; July 21st, 2009 at 11:39 PM.

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