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    Girl With A Sword

    The picture was too big for the scanner, but I got the main part of the picture. Any crits much appreciated.
    Girl With A Sword

    couln't fit the feet on the scanner, sorry.
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    this is bad were did you learn how to draw girls. This looks like a Unic blah blah
    you shouldent try to draw your girl friend intil youve seen more you imcompatant fool
    hhahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahaahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha hahahahahahahahhahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahah ah
    that should take up some room:evilbat:
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    I like the emotion that you are putting forth in her stance, but i think that you need to work on your structure, and anatomy. Some good books to pick up if you are interested in honing your skills would be anything by Burne Hogarth (Dynamic Figure Drawing, etc.) Keep it up!

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    Originally posted by die_with_honor
    this is bad were did you learn how to draw girls. This looks like a Unic blah blah
    you shouldent try to draw your girl friend intil youve seen more you imcompatant fool
    hhahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahaahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha hahahahahahahahhahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahah ah
    that should take up some room:evilbat:
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    Originally posted by die_with_honor
    you imcompatant fool

    Wow! Brother. Now that's funny. lol Be happy you're only 16 :p

    -Joshua

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    I think you are on the right track,
    and I agree with Tonia Laird and 100% with bustabustu and JOSHUATHEJAMES
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    keep it up

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    Thanks for the good crit, except you dwh. Your post was stupid.
    And you took the initials to my band! (darkwing heroes)

    I've got dynamic anotomy, goof book, need to apply it more. Back to the drawing board I guess!
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    dynamic anatomy? ehhhh... get a good book

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    any suggestions main loop?
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    HEY
    Party On Dudes

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    Mr. Teatime: For book suggestions do a search on the topic in the forum. Or click on over here...http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...ecommend+books

    I agree with previous crits (minus one in particular). Another good place to pick up some tips in the forum is the LIFE DRAWING, LEARNING, TECHNIQUES, & TUTORIALS area. Hope this helps and please keep drawing.

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    It's kind of sad when someone who's signature says "LIVE WITH HONOUR", doesn't live up to what they preach.

    You've improved a great deal since I saw your first post in Middle class Mr. Teatime. I too, like her stance, and the look in her eyes. It's like she's daring anyone to mess with her. Work on the anatomy some more. You'll get it in time. Good work. Your characters have life.
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    Thanks nikia!
    William over there is kind of sad sometimes (dwh)
    allways talking about taking over the world and never doing anything about it.
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    I love girl’s and I love sword’s and I love girls with swords they turn… I better stop there… yeah this pencil sketch is cool, and I would like to see it finished. Also I think you should use more Photographic reference cuz that’s the best way to learn the human anatomy. The sketch it’s on the right track her body is all in the right proportions but needs more curves other wise she would look too masculine and less feminine, remember Girls are all about their lovely heap’s.
    My tip is that next time you draw anything use a photograph and also start with the basic shapes of the body for example the head should always start with a sphere the torso and oval etc. and don’t pay attention to idiotic comments cuz we all are here to learn
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    I really like the expression on her face, and the composition is nice, although her pose is just a LITTLE bit stiff, not too bad though... but one of my main concerns is the folds in the clothing are undiscernable, if you made the whole picture have a tad bit more depth, I think the girl (and her clothing) would be a lot more accented on the paper, thus giving her a more life-like feel.

    Keep up the good work...

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