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    hey ya'll

    Just wanted to let you guys know that my web comic is up at WebComics nation.com. The comic is called " Sword of the Savage Samurai" its a action adventure/horror comic series. It's about a bad ass werewolf samurai on the hunt for Demons,monsters, and anything else that goes bump in the night. The first story is up and free so check it out if ya get a chance. Here is the link:
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    so... why are the buff hairy dudes hugging and screaming?

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    Need a clickable link, dude...I am definitely not typing out the address in the image you have attached.

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    second that. I'm curious, but not that curious

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    Apparently that link just brings up the title page. Pressing "previous" from there is what brings the whole comic up. Odd.

    Anyway, clickable links to the rescue!: http://www.webcomicsnation.com/tommm...=savagesamurai

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    Find a writer.

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    The art work is good, but the dialog reads like a word for word dictation from a D&D game session. You realy need to find someone to help you with the script.

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    I like it. I think you have misleadingly bad graphic design and the promo poster is not a good example of your work. I found that panel to be a black eye. Aside from the corny bear claw shenanigans the dialogue was okay. The description on top sounds like you could have a good simple franchise. It sounds straight forward to manage. No convoluted story arch just whoopin monster ass. If I were a publisher I'd pick you up.
    Your character design, color and composition is very impressive though. Keep up the good work. You should have good future in comics.

    PS you should cut his side burns (he looks like a wolverine knock off)
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    I realize it's fantasy but it's still a period piece, so the dialog was distracting to me. Unless you've designed a universe where that wouldnt be out of place like say....Afro Samurai. But if such a world is your setting there is no sign of that fact in those pages. The art is killer though. I really enjoyed a lot of the art.

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    O.K. as a writer you're not Alan Moore but you're a heckuva lot better than some of these guys are saying. I'll add you to my webcomic links.

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