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    Don't forget our dre... Destiny.

    Don't know what to do...
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    Howdy,

    That pic would be much easier (for some of us) to view at about half that width.
    I don't understand the title but I like the idea of the pic.

    crits so far:

    1) there are some squiggly smudgy brushstrokes and speckled paint brush patterns in the sky that are a little distracting.

    2) glowing eyes are distracting

    3) The solid black silhouette of the ground doesn't match the gentle shading on the kids

    4) If you continue to improve the proportions and anatomy of the kids, it will really pay off

    5) the plane seems uncomfortable close to the border of the image. You could think about extending the canvas or possibly shrink/move the plane

    Hope that helps.
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    psi hit the nail on the head, proportions, anatomy, composition and lose the glowing eyes and solid black foreground and you are in good shape.

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    Thank you.

    I think thats help.

    Actually, this is my old artwork.
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