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    Irawan:thank you my friend;really apreciate your kind words,wich are too much for me i think.i posted a comment on your thread

    scorge : thank you for your kind words and support : )


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    hi,sorry for the delay,i was very busy,now i can focus on this piece,i added colors and Shazim's son,wich look's big already,haha
    im waiting your feedback!

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    the wisps and tendrils are looking really hot, and lend a lot of energy to the piece. There are places where they feel more on the surface of a painting than existing in space, but I'm sure that'll resolve pretty instinctively as you work on things.

    I love that he has his dad's hair.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jason C-M View Post
    the wisps and tendrils are looking really hot, and lend a lot of energy to the piece. There are places where they feel more on the surface of a painting than existing in space, but I'm sure that'll resolve pretty instinctively as you work on things.

    I love that he has his dad's hair.
    THANK you for your comment Jason,im working on it now

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    Wow I'm loving your latest progress.

    Nothing much to crit as everything looks in place for me. I know you're going to touchup the colour since it looks more of a mood colour at the moment.

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    Somehow I liked the b/W version better.
    The green and red color dont match to him...yet ^^

    The man looks really good and elegant.

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    hueyyeng: hi,thank you for your comment : )

    Vaejoun: thank you,me too im not very excited about the colors i used,i made the image darker and it looks better now(i think)haha

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    here is my final image,comments and critiques are welcome.

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    Stunning piece you got here - seeing this now, I think I shouldn't have gone for a more comical approach. But nevertheless, it looks awesome.

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    Great piece but I prefer the black and white rendering.

    If you can create a strong focus area with colours with some varieties in it, that will be awesome. My 2 cents.

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    Master Chill: thank you

    hueyyeng: thanks a lot,can you give me suggestions??

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    The colour in your final piece is not that harmony. It consists mainly of strong vivid blue and red colour.

    You can try to make the sky with a deep purple hue to compliment the red and blue colours in the scene. Sometimes a picture worth a thousands word so if you don't mind I did a quick paintover of your work.

    A real quick paintover so take it with a pinch of salt.

    Newborn - Follow me (FINAL image)

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    looking very good diisar, i actually like the colours you used but you could drop the saturations down a little bit, please have a look at my thread
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    hueyyeng : hi,thank you for your help my friend,i just came back from a trip and the challenge is already over,anyway thanks for your support,really apreciate that

    miycko : thanks

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    WOW! wicked entry you have here! Don't you have a sketchbook or something here on the forums? It would be good to see what other works you're doing
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