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July 30th, 2009 #27
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July 30th, 2009 #29
Randis Wow-THAT is so-very cool . i can't belive you managed to do all this in such a short time, i definately see what you meant, i just wonder if i will be able to get my image anywhere near that with just one day left. what the heck it's worth a try. Thanks a lot
July 30th, 2009 #30
oh i forgot to mention and its not very clean to see. the red light on the dudes face comes from the inside of the helmet, there is a red lamp in the lower part. that helps to show off the face and light from that direction makes a face scary too.
As you see i darkened the room on the right side, that helps to put more focus on the main characters, makes the image easier to read. First you look at them, then at the door, then at the red signs, then you know there is danger and this 2 people are the cause of it. the your eyes will wander around in the darker areas searching for details, exploring.
Its not all about effects or cool designs, its about composition and readability.
can't wait to see your final entry
July 30th, 2009 #31
July 31st, 2009 #32
Taking Randis's advice i darkened the image and added the other details in the paint over he did and i like how it turned out. i've never done an image this dark so it's a nice change, hopefully i'll be able to do it for future paintings.
I just submitted my entry about two minutes ago then realised there are no buttons on the girl's shirt, this is because earlier in the day we had a power as i was doing them & i hadn't saved. & ofcourse i forgot to do them before submiting, oh well atleast i managed to finish.
Last edited by miycko; July 31st, 2009 at 08:34 PM.
July 31st, 2009 #33
August 19th, 2009 #34
It seems with your latest environment you're rendering weach section to a finished stage, one at a time. I see how you've made it work, but really, you should try working on the entire image at the same time. Working on the entire image allows you to see the overall direction you are going, understanding lighting, colour and atmosphere. Your stages work, but i think youre making it harder on yourself with your current process. Though, the image looks cool.
DIDNT SEE THE FINAL: Looks awesome! With your next image, keep in mind what i said
August 22nd, 2009 #35
ahem bigus_dickus lol, thanks for stopping by i started colouring with line art first & kinda got used to colouring piece by piece, guess i kinda got myself into a rut with that one. I'll definately take your advice & try it out on my current image
September 2nd, 2009 #36
Just some few observations about the finished piece. The guard on the right in the chair doesn't look like he's actually in the chair. He looks like he's rigid and only his upper back and his upper thighs are against the chair. Also, the two main characters on not on the plane of the floor, it would appear. They look like they are floating, or at least their heels are. I would try to make their feet in the same plane and perspective as the floor plane.
Other than that, very good piece. It gives a great story and begs the question: "Who is that dude?"
Anyways, g'job. Keep them coming.
September 3rd, 2009 #37
Osau thank you for stopping by i had hell trying to get that guard in the chair & in the end i just gave up, thanks to the deadline & all, and the perspective of the feet is completely off i have to say i suck at that, i started a sketchbook so here's hoping that i learn as much i have during this contest