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    meh vine is distracting

    i dont love it but this is your piece. If you see how it works or how you could make it work then trust yourself, you are obviously extremely capable.

    Last edited by Bhrandon; July 22nd, 2009 at 11:28 PM. Reason: had more to say
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    i agree with bhrandon - nice piece - but i think the new vine you added is a little overkill - and distracts from your otherwise good composition - just my 2 cents :-)
    good work otherwise though

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    Superb work, looking forward to seeing final piece.

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    Vaejoun – your review is much appreciated... thank you

    - With this piece my workflow is like you laid it out; pencil - scanned – digitally painted.
    - I like to push the colors as much as possible then push back with it’s neutralizing counter part so not to lose it’s vibrancy yet keeping it appearing grayish. So yes, it will be less saturated.


    Bworx – I have considered a narrative image in the lighted area but I dismissed it for two reasons

    1. I have too many figures in the scene already
    2. I what the image in the middle to be a universal symbol for any good deed

    Thank you for your idea, it a good one if I wanted to focuses on a specific type of good deed.

    Rizo – thanks man… H.R. Giger and Carlos Huante! I can only wish, but I’m trying.

    Randis – thank you for you kind words and taking the time to giving me feedback

    - I’m trying to make the connection to the theme as obvious as possible without eliminating the symbolism of the image. The demons are regular people doing evil deeds and the small bright light is one person doing a good deed that can be any deed.

    Zimfin – I am glad you like my piece, hope you like my upcoming update with its new color tweaks

    - like I mention to Randis I’m trying to make the connection to the theme as obvious as possible without eliminating the symbolism of the image. My intention is to let the viewer come up with there interpretation of the two forces colliding.

    Bhrandon – thanks for the vow of confidence

    I don’t like the vine ether, so I’m looking at other options

    Lincoln.renall – vine are out… thank you for your feedback it helped me make my decision.

    Kimliatach – I’m looking forward to finishing it. Thanks for posting

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    The vine kind of spoils it a bit, it's not needed, as the simplicity of the light is enough to explain the idea. Well done by the way!

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    awesome....love the textures and composition....i guess u need to add detail in the new born leaves. looks gr8 so far

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    Last update

    this one is for you Wakoes,

    I am almost done,

    just some minor changes that no one will notice and one last chance at feedback from all of you before I declare it final

    Name:  Good deed9 (s) final.jpg
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    Belinda Morris, maria riaz - Thank you for your posts and you complements.

    As for the vines I decided not to go with them but I hope what I have is enough tell my idea… I know the image is a little symbolic for a concept piece but I wanted it to have some of my artistic opinion on the world.

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    man, good job!
    This is turning out really nice!
    This will be saved to my hard drive the moment it became final.

    cheers

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    i like it better without the vines.

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    very nice

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    Wow.
    Nuff Said

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    Final

    OK this is my final image, hope you all like it…

    I do have some time to fix anything you all spot that I didn’t, so please let me know.

    Name:  One Small Good deed(s2)final.jpg
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    Definitely taking evil to a new extreme. Feels like I've found the world's first eye candy store. Actually had to look up a better word than awesome cause it just wasn't good enough.

    Zero Cool.

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    Randis – hey coming form you it’s a great a complement especially after seeing you latest submissions nice job and thank you.

    Bhrandon – thank you i am glad you like it

    Doodlebug – thank you... much appreciated

    Scorge – worlds first eye candy “WOW” I don’t know if I deserve that but thank you. I hope you can see the meaning behind all that candy.

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    Awesome work there, and love the monster designs

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    love it, saved in fav folder.

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    WOW! Holycrap!
    Dude, amazing artwork, congrats!! Great monster designs.... I see a predator like in there, am I right?

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    Sidharth Chaturvedi - Thank You I’m glad you like

    Randis - I like you pieces too, how about this, if you send me a high rez of you piece I will send you a H.R. of this one.

    Rod.windt - I like you enthusiasm, it part of the reason I love to create art, thank you. As for the Predator… I didn’t see it before but I kind do now… not on purpose.

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    newborn

    nice,i was waiting to see the final and you did not disappoint!

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    Quote Originally Posted by edarttogo View Post
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    this one is for you Wakoes,

    I am almost done,

    just some minor changes that no one will notice and one last chance at feedback from all of you before I declare it final

    Name:  Good deed9 (s) final.jpg
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    waaaa thanks you Mr edarttogo I feel so honors that I can watch a working progress from a magnificent artist like you
    and I'm sorry that I just reply just now and I glad that your remove that vein I agreed with everyone your work it already totally awesome Mr. edarttogo
    your final it totally wicked so so awesome the eyes, the skin, that creature, the light, the ray everything ... everything it so perfect aaaaaaaaa ... it so astonishing so amazing I'm totally love your work

    just another ordinary man who have an used pen with a lot of tape on it with his old computer
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    wow this is the best piece up here, this babies gotta win 1st place.. , hehe, Javier just told me about the contest, . ive got 2 days

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    Javo526 – good to know I didn't disappoint, thanks


    Wakoes – hey man you are too much, I’m speechless! I am honored to get a reaction like yours. I really don’t deserve it, but thank you for it anyways!!!


    AlexGonzales – I don’t know if it’s the best or if it can win but I had a lot of fun doing it.

    You and Javier have one more day to go, I'v seen both your work and you should be fine. Good Luck!

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    Holy crap dude! Amazing image. I apologize, I am not understanding the connection of this image to the theme of the contest. I see an angel fighting demons. Hope you don't mind if I save this in my inspirations folder.

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    well....

    it looks like theres no chance of me winning this contest

    Please visit
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    To contact me, email me at: hpsvg@hotmail.com

    I hope you enjoy my artwork!
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    Man that's amazing!!

    Imagination encircles the world

    Sketchbook

    Save earth video
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    sure, send me a PM with your email address, i will send you. let me know what pic you want

    thanks!

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    very nice piece we have here... I also liked the part where the reptile creature is grasping another one's head and shoving it inside its mouth... it looks like a hell portal...

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    Very original idea, excellently rendered. Top work. Gets my vote, if I had one that is!

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    I really like what you've done. You've expressed an idea without it being excessively literal. You've composed it so you have a nice first read. And you have subtlety in the areas of low contrast to continue to draw viewers in. In addition, it seems clear that you've designed for the placement of text and the magazine logo. It already looks like the cover of a magazine or a game package. Excellent work.

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