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    Talking Bring Something Into the World - Mother Nature

    My idea is bringing life in general into the world
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    FINAL? need feedback!


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    this is beautiful, id like to see how its going to turn out

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    Lovely drawing, I think I'd need to see a bit more rendering before volunteering a crit.

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    Nice style, i agree with pearlyking i'll have to wait till more work is done.
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    i think this has a lot of potential, please keep going with it!
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    This is nice Justice. I like the feel of this, kind of reminds me of the old turn of the century artists (which I love).

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    This is going to be a vibrant and eye catching take on 'Newborn', in a really individual way Justice. Great to see. I'm a bit nervous that big fish mouth thing behind the girl is about to eat her though. Or is natural selection part of your underlying message?

    And wow - just noticed how fast you are going. Do you wear a crash helmet?
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    Thanks, I didn't intend that ;p
    And yeah I worked non stop on the painting last night - so exhausting

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    Hi, it is very much a colorful piece but I think it lacks a bit of depth. It is a very intriguing collage of images but the message is a bit garbled. Are the animals attracted to the wood nymph? I feel as though the jaguar should almost poof into the scene by some mystic source much as the ape in the tree did. Excellent color palette by the way! I love the line work too.

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    My idea was just to show mother nature and the plant/animal life that she is part of

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    i really like this
    the inking and colors are amazing
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    your image looks a little flat, I think you can push the values more to create more depth. It seems a bit rushed, maybe it's just your style, not sure...I do like the line work.

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    The draftsmanship is impeccable, but, to a certain extent, I have to agree with ROBOT_TANK. I would push the values a little more to make it seem less flat.

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    The values are looking better already.

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    looks much better now
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