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July 7th, 2009 #1
We are the first to hatch...(UPDATED: Second Submission pg 2)
I hope you guys and gals are doing great.
Here's my submission for the "Newborn" contest.
I wish I had more time but im inbetween assignments and could only affors about 3-4 days on this, so I had to go with a composition with a lot of negative space.
Best viewed (and intended to be viewed) on a black background
Critiques and comments are always welcome.
All the very best to you and good luck in the contest!
Title: We are the first to hatch..
Last edited by Cryptcrawler; July 15th, 2009 at 05:29 AM.
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July 7th, 2009 #2
I don't really think I can critique this. This looks beautiful.
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July 7th, 2009 #3
man Cryptcrawler just when i was about to give up on this contest...i see your entry, it just fucking makes me motivated to the max!!! fuck man i love the way you color thanx for motivating me with this awesome entry
Obey the principle without being bound by it. LEARN, MASTER AND ACHIEVE!!!~ Bruce Lee
When one has no form, one can be all forms; when one has no style, he can fit in with any style.~ Bruce Lee
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July 8th, 2009 #4
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July 8th, 2009 #5
oh Buddy...just about shit myself when i saw this earlier tonight. perfectly composed Brad. really smart use of space.
im off to go cry myself to sleep now.
big hugs brudda.
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July 8th, 2009 #8
the detail on that sack is intense! what's frightening is it looks like they invaded and hatched in someone's home O.O excellent work.
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July 8th, 2009 #9
There are a few things I could have done better I think, the blinds are too big on the window and I think I could have maybe taken the creature to a more visceral, grosser level, but I really wanted some humanity to be intact, I find the more alien the creature the less were able to see ourselves in it and ultimately we lose that connectivity and impact with the viewer. I also wanted to leave a backdoor open for the viewers imagination in case they saw it as once human.
I wish I wasnt up against a wall with a pending assignment or else I would have been able to do something more ambitious.
Im so glad you dig this, Boss. Getting feedback like that from you really does mean a lot to me, not just as a bud, but as a teacher and trendsetter, it lets me know im on the right track and progressing.
Hugs back atcha my man, ill hopefully catch you later.
Of course whether they landed from another planet or dimension, or were hapless victims taken over by a parasite or maybe were even exposed to some form of weird radiation and mutated, or something even more far out than that - is entirely up to the viewer, just how I like it.
Thanks very much for taking the time to comment.
July 8th, 2009 #10
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July 8th, 2009 #12
Awesome - great use of the negative space.
Mind made worlds.
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July 8th, 2009 #13
Sweetness! But what is with the thick black line on the left and the bright green spot?
If its some glowy pod thing to the left,shouldnt the sac( man its grossly spot on!) have more of that color reflected on its left side?
Those arms will be in my nightmares. i'd hate to be second to hatch,for real.
"Steering perception? i am.
Inviting contradiction? i am."
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