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    We are the first to hatch...(UPDATED: Second Submission pg 2)

    Hey all!
    I hope you guys and gals are doing great.
    Here's my submission for the "Newborn" contest.
    I wish I had more time but im inbetween assignments and could only affors about 3-4 days on this, so I had to go with a composition with a lot of negative space.
    Best viewed (and intended to be viewed) on a black background

    Critiques and comments are always welcome.

    All the very best to you and good luck in the contest!

    Title: We are the first to hatch..



    We are the first to hatch...(UPDATED: Second Submission pg 2)

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    I don't really think I can critique this. This looks beautiful.

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    man Cryptcrawler just when i was about to give up on this contest...i see your entry, it just fucking makes me motivated to the max!!! fuck man i love the way you color thanx for motivating me with this awesome entry


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    Phuck! That is one solid piece!

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    oh Buddy...just about shit myself when i saw this earlier tonight. perfectly composed Brad. really smart use of space.


    im off to go cry myself to sleep now.

    big hugs brudda.

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    Oh dang..Schweet bro, you be a human Vray renderer.

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    yet another amazing piece, your colour palette is so good and the rendering is the icing on the cake wicked

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    the detail on that sack is intense! what's frightening is it looks like they invaded and hatched in someone's home O.O excellent work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ninjacat11 View Post
    I don't really think I can critique this. This looks beautiful.
    Thanks so much ninjacat!
    There are a few things I could have done better I think, the blinds are too big on the window and I think I could have maybe taken the creature to a more visceral, grosser level, but I really wanted some humanity to be intact, I find the more alien the creature the less were able to see ourselves in it and ultimately we lose that connectivity and impact with the viewer. I also wanted to leave a backdoor open for the viewers imagination in case they saw it as once human.

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    man Cryptcrawler just when i was about to give up on this contest...i see your entry, it just fucking makes me motivated to the max!!! fuck man i love the way you color thanx for motivating me with this awesome entry
    Thanks Oni, inspiration is what its all about man. All I have to do is take one spin around here or flip through my Massive Black volume 1 and im reaching higher.

    Quote Originally Posted by Chupacabra View Post
    Phuck! That is one solid piece!
    Hee hee, thanks chup!
    I wish I wasnt up against a wall with a pending assignment or else I would have been able to do something more ambitious.

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    oh Buddy...just about shit myself when i saw this earlier tonight. perfectly composed Brad. really smart use of space.


    im off to go cry myself to sleep now.

    big hugs brudda.

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    El coro!
    Im so glad you dig this, Boss. Getting feedback like that from you really does mean a lot to me, not just as a bud, but as a teacher and trendsetter, it lets me know im on the right track and progressing.
    Hugs back atcha my man, ill hopefully catch you later.

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    yet another amazing piece, your colour palette is so good and the rendering is the icing on the cake wicked
    Thank you very much ahchu, I appreciate the feedback very much!

    Quote Originally Posted by ROBOT_TANK View Post
    the detail on that sack is intense! what's frightening is it looks like they invaded and hatched in someone's home O.O excellent work.
    Thanks very much for this feedback, it really makes my day when I get to hear what stories people come away with. You also pretty much tagged it right on, which is just too cool. The idea was definately an invasion type scenario.
    Of course whether they landed from another planet or dimension, or were hapless victims taken over by a parasite or maybe were even exposed to some form of weird radiation and mutated, or something even more far out than that - is entirely up to the viewer, just how I like it.

    Thanks very much for taking the time to comment.

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    Wow....simply awesome...

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    Awesome - great use of the negative space.

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    Sweetness! But what is with the thick black line on the left and the bright green spot?
    If its some glowy pod thing to the left,shouldnt the sac( man its grossly spot on!) have more of that color reflected on its left side?

    Those arms will be in my nightmares. i'd hate to be second to hatch,for real.

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    absolutely crazy! that is some serious technique with the colour and value and lighting and rendering. Just absolutely study worthy that's for sure. Best of luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by _MOTH_ View Post
    yeah that is cool
    Thank you moth!

    Quote Originally Posted by Artboy View Post
    Wow....simply awesome...
    Artboy I really appreciate that, thanks!

    Quote Originally Posted by graphicgolem View Post
    Awesome - great use of the negative space.
    Thanks GG!
    I had to do something with a lot of negative space since im on a really short leash at the moment - waiting on assignment details.

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    Sweetness! But what is with the thick black line on the left and the bright green spot?
    If its some glowy pod thing to the left,shouldnt the sac( man its grossly spot on!) have more of that color reflected on its left side?

    Those arms will be in my nightmares. i'd hate to be second to hatch,for real.
    Thats a stud, or could possibly be a 2X4 or maybe even a window frame given the scale to the moth. If youve ever noticed in attics or basements there are sometimes stilts or support beams in odd places.
    Your basically looking through some sort of missing area to a wall, it could be missing for any reason, or possibly never completed to begin with, or maybe even boarded up - there are plenty of things that dont make absolute perfect sense in buildings. It looks more balanced if you view it on a black background, which its intended to be viewed on.
    The green is illuminated fog, or dust or whatever it is thats steaming off the eggsack, use your imagination, its really only there for ambience.
    I went about underlighting the eggsack like your talking about initially but it really cooled off the eggsack too much, in addition to conflcting with the pinks, creams and greys of the eggsack, and theres enough of a little ambient reflected light in there to represent it.

    Its not perfect and Im certianly not pretending to be a flawless draftsman, heh - quite the contrary.

    I appreciate your attention to detail and critique though.
    Best wishes and escpecially thanks for your time!

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    Very atmospheric and creepy, CryptCrawler. Great lighting and I like the colour balance too. Works for me.
    Do you have any wips you feel like posting to show how you got to this stage. I'd love to see them, please, as I'm sure some other would too.

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    Mmm, alien sac blobs. Really nice work on those textures. I'm distracted by the bright lower-left corner but other than that it's great!

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    Wow this is amazing cryptcrawler! Really impress with your use of negative space.

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    Well now, this is really frightening! I think I will not sleep well tonight. Great work!

    I am really impressed with your work, BTW, the "Asking for Directions" piece on your deviantart site is fuckin awesome. It pulls me into a very real world... I love that!

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    beautiful! creey creepy beautiiiiiiific!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justice Von Brandt View Post
    This is really cool, love the sci fi
    Thanks very much, im glad the sci-fi came through!

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    Very atmospheric and creepy, CryptCrawler. Great lighting and I like the colour balance too. Works for me.
    Do you have any wips you feel like posting to show how you got to this stage. I'd love to see them, please, as I'm sure some other would too.

    Thanks so much Nick, im really happy those elements came through for you.

    I never save my WIP's since im constantly working over them and spending so long on each piece, there would be hundreds per work and quite frankly I dont want the clutter in my folders.
    I only work on 2 layers, one of them a safety layer so I dont lose what I like, so the work tends to evolve really quickly as I try to capitalise on happy mistakes or good grooves and cant be bothering with capturing WIP's that are useful, it just distracts me.
    Im a shitty multi-tasker and like to stay locked into one mode.
    Filming something will be in the works soon, thats much more hands free and would be way more useful I think.

    Thanks so much for your interest, im sorry I cant provide something useful at the moment in terms of a WIP.

    Quote Originally Posted by Baron Impossible View Post
    Mmm, alien sac blobs. Really nice work on those textures. I'm distracted by the bright lower-left corner but other than that it's great!
    Thanks Baron!
    Im glad you dig the alien sac-blobbage! I love to do disgusting textures.

    Open it up on a black background fullscreen. Thats how its intended to be viewed and it looks most balanced that way, at least I think it does and thats how it was created. It gives more of an impression that the room continues off camera, at least thats what ive attempted to give the illusion of.
    I appreciate the comments!

    Quote Originally Posted by hueyyeng View Post
    Wow this is amazing cryptcrawler! Really impress with your use of negative space.
    Thank you very much hueyyeng! I love to use negative space techniques, it gets me thinking less is more and balancing the composition as a whole, it really helps me evolve the focus.

    Thanks for your time and compiments!

    Quote Originally Posted by Muttonhead View Post
    Well now, this is really frightening! I think I will not sleep well tonight. Great work!

    I am really impressed with your work, BTW, the "Asking for Directions" piece on your deviantart site is fuckin awesome. It pulls me into a very real world... I love that!
    Oh hey thanks a lot muttonhead! Im really glad it had that effect! And thanks a mill for the compliments on the other piece!

    Quote Originally Posted by smokenmirrors View Post
    beautiful! creey creepy beautiiiiiiific!
    Thank you so much!
    I try to combine those 2 things as much as possible in my horror ideas and im very glad you came away with that feeling -it lets know im on the right track!

    All the best to you all, thanks for the feedback!

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    A great image, so well done. To make the process seem so effortless that is the hard part.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael Morisse View Post
    A great image, so well done. To make the process seem so effortless that is the hard part.

    Thanks Michael, im glad you dig it.
    You know I dunno if ive ever looked at anyones work and thought "it seems so effortless", I guess its because that art has always been all about blood, sweat, tears and confrontation for me - and thats just how I like it, its good for the soul.

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    I've asked about your ideas before on another site. I think if you were to write your own illustrated novel, I'd break necks to be the first one to get a copy.

    It seems you are at home with these concepts and the style is always amazing.

    I'm done boot-licking, just wanted to throw more support your way! =) Good luck.

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    very cool, i like it. The green is very toxic.
    I like the light that comes from the window, the light stripes on the creatures body look cool, tho i dont see where the light from the lower part of the window goes, i think it would cast light on the lower torso and upper leg too.

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    Pretty freaky. Love how its coming out of the dark like that. Beautiful!
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    Quote Originally Posted by gatling View Post
    I've asked about your ideas before on another site. I think if you were to write your own illustrated novel, I'd break necks to be the first one to get a copy.

    It seems you are at home with these concepts and the style is always amazing.

    I'm done boot-licking, just wanted to throw more support your way! =) Good luck.
    Hey its not boot licking to tell someone you like thier stuff, I send man-crush love-letters to el coro all the time about how much I like his art and vision; we all like to hear it and it keeps us going.
    I really appreciate the support, I never get tired of it - its what I work for, I want people to like my material and be moved enough to actually write something, it means more to me than you may think.

    As for an illustrated graphic novel: thats a dream of mine. I am doing pre-pro for a short illustrated horror story that I plan on being able to finish in between my paying gigs.
    Thanks for the compliments, I appreciate it.

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    very cool, i like it. The green is very toxic.
    I like the light that comes from the window, the light stripes on the creatures body look cool, tho i dont see where the light from the lower part of the window goes, i think it would cast light on the lower torso and upper leg too.

    cheers
    Thanks Randis!
    Yeah, its buttock could definately be more fleshed out, and probably should be. I vaguely remember doing it but being unsatisfied with the balance of the picture afterwards and then started putting in a curtain to justify its lower half being obscured from backlighting, it is leaning over into the window-light after all. But I agree, it should be more convincing right there - I might take a crack at a touch up.
    I appreciate your keen eye and feedback man, and thanks for the compliments too, im glad you dig it.

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    Pretty freaky. Love how its coming out of the dark like that. Beautiful!
    -CM
    Thanks crayonmaster! Yeah its coming out of a corner there, I tried to make that upper corner with the gross membrane/hive thing be an anchor of sorts so the action radiated from it, but I dont think I was as successful as id like to have been.

    But im glad you dig it and I appreciate you taking the time to say so, all the best!

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    well ,what to say?it's killer good
    if you enter this competition ,we are all doomed!!!

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    guess we have a winner!
    I keep catching new things every time i stare The bounce light..alright imma calm down. This eliminates the need of coffee in the morning, thank you much sir

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