Hello all! I've started working on a short film and I'm looking for some critique on this background layout. The character was drawn there for scale.
Know that the colors are only a hopeful guess. The final look will be traditional, not digital. The colors here are how I hope the finals will turn out.
The things I'm most concerned about are:
The center (yellow) window reading as open, and a light being on, implying there's someone there. ( a later shot closes in on the window, to further imply this)
The selective coloring making the eye notice what it's supposed to (the window, the character, the green door, the vespa is important to the last shot)
The red vespa being too distracting. ( i hope not, i like that red!)
For this scene, the character is walking down the sidewalk to the house with the green door.
btw, I want to start an ongoing thread to post work and receive critique specifically for this film project, where do you think would be the best place, sketchbooks?