Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: Aspiring concept artist shares new work

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Location
    Norwich, UK
    Posts
    7
    Thanks
    3
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Smile Aspiring concept artist shares new work

    Hey, thought i'd post a new painting here and see what people think-its just a personal piece. Had the original Ghost recon games plus some other FPS's in mind with this one.
    Head over to my DA if your interested in some more stuff or wanna check out progress on the concepts for the Dear Esther mod for HL2.

    Thanks for viewing!

    Ben
    http://ben-andrews.deviantart.com
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    Phoenix
    Posts
    150
    Thanks
    117
    Thanked 50 Times in 44 Posts
    looks pretty good. But you have some composition problems i think. You have two main focal points. the road through the trees and the building. They don't seem to let the eye flow through the painting. I think the building and background atmosphere is a much stronger focal point and you could probably do away with the road and shift the picture to the right and show more background. good stuff overall though.
    Simplify
    Sketchbook
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  4. The Following User Says Thank You to LumoGraphite For This Useful Post:


  5. #3
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Location
    Norwich, UK
    Posts
    7
    Thanks
    3
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Thanks yeah i kinda didnt have a very strong plan for what turned out to be quite a finished piece, i should have stepped back from it more than i did. Interesting about shifting the image-maybe ill cut it in two and make two paintings.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  6. #4
    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Posts
    7
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    I agree with sPCLaW, to be honest though, the road could actually be seperated and made into a different piece. I also feel that for an outdoor scene with good light, your heavily shadowed areas are too dark. It draws a lot of attention and with such wonderful painted textures on the building, the heavy shadows shouldn't detach from that. Also, if possible, how about some light through the trees? If done with subtlety, might add some more life into your luscious forest.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

Similar Threads

  1. aspiring freelance artist offering commisions/ looking for work
    By chincrise in forum ARTISTS LOOKING FOR WORK!
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: December 30th, 2013, 01:32 PM
  2. Replies: 0
    Last Post: December 2nd, 2010, 09:54 AM
  3. A young, nooby, aspiring artist needs help. please critizice work!
    By Constantini in forum ART CRITIQUE CENTER
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: December 13th, 2009, 04:11 PM
  4. Aspiring concept artist
    By Rhythmus in forum Artist Lounge
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: February 26th, 2007, 12:06 AM
  5. Aspiring concept artist looking for work
    By Digital_Blacksmith in forum ARTISTS LOOKING FOR WORK!
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: February 8th, 2006, 04:26 PM

Members who have read this thread: 1

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook