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    Dragoon (The girl with no fear)

    Promo illustration of my Character =P Dragoon, so yeah give me yer thoughts





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    i love them both. but the color of her skin on the first one is way better. very nice.

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    hey thanks for the comment ... well I havent posted the final illustration =) :chug:

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    This picture is great, and I really like the subtle coloring.
    I think it would have given the character a tougher look if you had drawn the shape of the nose. It would make the face appear more angular giving her some more of that badass attitude. As opposed to the soft pretty girl look.

    Another anatomy crit is that I seems like the lower part of her left leg seems somewhat short (compare to the bicep) and the foot seems overly tapered.

    I did I real quick paint over to show you what I mean. But all in all its just your personally preference and I think the pic looks great already.





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    You have some damn good work. I think that Steiner has a good point about her face. She does look just a little too cute to be same bad arse chick.

    I like the first i little more as the design elements really help to make it look more polished.

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    Glad to see you here Charles. I've always loved your character, and she's looking more and more developed with each image.

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    Gday

    Its good to see old mates from other forums

    Now about the retouching thing .. well I did draw the nose and took the dark shadow out and left a white highlight witch you guys cant see it cuz of the resolution of the file Ö Ö Ill love to hear more comments from every one else

    oh yeah thanks for taking a look and commenting & SteinerH thanks for taking the extra time to point out you comment


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    hey

    nice to see you posting your kickass work on conceptart.

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    Very good jop!
    Welcome!

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    Cool

    hey more familiar faces thanks for the kind comments duded's :chug:





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    nothing is showing up for me

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    Dig this illustration - specially the POSTURE .

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    most interesting stuff

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    I like the rendering you used on the first one.
    Maybe you can push it even further...

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    The pose reminds me of one of the cowers for Metal Hurlant, think it was Travis Charest, not sure (doesnít really matter)
    ...Anyhow good job!

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    may be just me, but i like the skintone on the second better, icy cool, a little more work on that version (shading/highlights on the face/leg/shoulderplate) and maybe a little stretching of the front leg (would give it more depth and force your eye to the centre) as it looks a little short and thin perspective wise but, fine work sir

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    Some beautiful work happenin' here! As already mentioned, something isn't working 100% with her left leg. Also I think the head might be a bit small - you are looking down on her and her head is about the same size as her breast. The design elements on the first one are intersting and make up for a lack of shadow.

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    Nice, reminds me of the metal gear solid concepts for sum reason, mabye color on the first one..

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    Cool yo

    Hey dudeís thanks for the important feed back and kind commentís

    Yup Im know thatís she wasnít 100% Ill get on to fix it soon enough when I get the time any ways thanks for the love people, oh about Charetís influence yup therís some of that in the soup and bout her Boobs well shes a very gifted girl



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    kick ass

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    Me likes.


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    Oh very cool, i love it

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    Cool

    Hey dudeís thanks for the kind comments Ill up date the illustration soon

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    Nice stuff there man.

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    changed the angle of the face, and brought it forward/up a bit..
    nice work man .. keep it comming


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