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    ThE MonK.....

    hello everybody

    here is my new pic

    i used corel draw

    and genius pen tablet 8x6


    and for your inform. iam never studied any thing about drawing thats my own learning

    no mentor leran me anything i know i have alot of wrongs but here is it to critique

    i hope u like it.....

    and thankx

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    Find a reference picture for his muscles, eg. on his chest, they are too small and shouldn't have lines drawn around them! This might be useful, actually http://www.kieranyanner.com/studio/

    Also he needs proper ears, not just bumps.

    The hands are quite well done but the pointing fingers are too short in relation to the rest, and all the fingers are a bit slim, making them look like female hands, and not matching his body. Also his sleeves are defying gravity.

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    really man iam thankful to you and thank you for your critique

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    Hi there,
    I would suggest, you don't spend too much time working on one piece but make hundreds of very basic sketches. I see that you have been practicing but it's a long journey and I would suggest you keep doing and posting your studies instead.
    Nevertheless, this IS a cool image
    Cheers,
    Khan

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    I am very happy that u reply and critique and it is nice words and thank you ;D

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