Everybody knows the pinocchio story-geppetto was creating a puppet which finally got alive.
In my picture you see pinocchio just waking up in anger because geppetto was trying to paint his nose with pink colour.
Last edited by Irawan; July 31st, 2009 at 03:38 AM.
Good job on the colours and the face. The black branch in the foreground is a bit too intrusive, though, and seems to be on its own. I think there needs to be more branches in the background to improve the depth and to better define the environment.
the only thing that doesn't seem right to me is that the eyes pop out to much
if you would put alighter color as the pupil or the whole eyes it will be alright but maybe you intended it to pop out like this
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Anyhow, as for other thoughts... well, I suppose the light's emanating off her hands, but I still can't help but think something's off with the breasts' lighting. (or rather, the shadows) But more importantly, her right shoulder seems unnatural to me, and the right arm, at least the upper arm, is much too long. I think. Or I'm just fooled by the left's perspective-shortening. Eheh. Well, would recommend giving that arm there a double-check, at least.
Edit: oh dearie, you're updating faster than I can type... heeh. Looking even more splendid, but I can help but question where the right arm is leading my eye - seems like a dead end? Might be out on a limb here, but since I've got doubts about the whole arm already, I wonder how it'd look if that arm instead was bent over the body, so to speak. Well. Just a thought, wouldn't bet on it being much of a good idea.
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I prefer the new sketch version, but I think it's will be great to give more space to subject, in this sense the first it's better, that's my opinion -__^ what do you think? Anyway compliments because your works it's really amazing.
I want to tell something different for my concept.
Geppeto is not lonely old man,he wife and has 2 kids, his job is making a pupet from wood, in his city he is famous because of that.
after tousand pupets he is done,he get board with his job.
one night he try something totaly different as ussual, he is not making animal pupet but he try to make small kid like pinocchio.
he is so happy and find joy when he is doing "finish,now i give him color..." he took the color and he start to paint his hood.
but sudenly the puppet was life and taking/brake his brush....and also hit him from the cahier,oh what happens then?
and the puppet sad"i dont like yellow hood,you know that!"
i am happy with geppetto character but pinocchio...?if i try something totaly different i am worried people doesnt recognize anymore.but probably better.i dont know...probably you can tell me what is good..
enjoy ..i hope you like my new concept.
cc are welcome,
Last edited by Irawan; July 22nd, 2009 at 06:45 PM.